An increasing concern for many
around the world is
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of skilled
.
it can be argued that the number of
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whose necessity
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very crucial in poor
,another opinion is that the number of
who
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skilled and
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to poor
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to
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in rich
. In
I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my
opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons
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why
believe that
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who are intelligent not necessary to employ in rich
from poor
. Perhaps the main reason why
are in favour of
idea is because they
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already developed their
but if they
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want to more develop in their
they can make
intelligent
who will
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their own
.
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the strongest argument in favour of
viewpoint is in the area of bright students.
, if any students can learn to a specific
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and so on. After
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back to their own country, they can easily improve their nation.
On the
hand, there are
strong arguments for the idea that in poor
skilled
are crucial important. Perhaps the main reason why
think that intelligent
are necessary in undeveloped or developing
. A good illustration of
is that the developing
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on their expert
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.
, they
the brilliant
more. A
point of expertise is that
from poor
earn more and
money through
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in their own
can be
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slightly.
In conclusion,
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of expert labour is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I believe strongly that the poor
have importance themselves brilliant labour.If the government take some measure, it will provide
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better development for developing
.