The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below gives information on changes
about
the Change preposition
in
propotion
of citizens who were born in Correct your spelling
proportion
Australia
and outside the country residing in other places from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that a large percentage of people
were born in cities
regardless of the country and the year.
According to
the data, the largest proportion of people
, 60%, was born in cities
outside the
Correct article usage
apply
Australia
in 1995, whereas
the smallest one, appromixately
15%, Correct your spelling
approximately
in
towns. Another key finding is that in 1995 there Add a missing verb
was in
are
more Wrong verb form
were
people
were
born in rural areas both in Unnecessary verb
apply
Australia
and outside, 25% and 40% respectively.
It can be seen from 2010 that the the
smallest position on the chart Remove the redundancy
apply
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
who were born in rural areas outside Australia
(near
10%), Change the word
nearly
while
the biggest one is people
from cities
outside the country (60%). What is more, people
from rural areas and cities
of Australia
are
rated equally, at about 17 Wrong verb form
were
percent
, in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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