The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
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The line graph
illustrate
the ratio of young people that Change the verb form
illustrates
playing
different outdoor sports in four categories from 1900 to nowadays.
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play
Overall
, swimming
category show and rose significantly from 1990 to Correct article usage
the swimming
Present
day, compared with ball games and biking/roller skating. Correct article usage
the Present
Whereas
the group jogging/running rose slight
in the given Change the adjective
slightly
period
.
Swimming started the period
below 15%, then
from 1995 to Correct article usage
the present
present
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the present
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increased
increase
constantly and Wrong verb form
increased
end
the given Wrong verb form
ended
period
as a lead of outdoor sports. Similarly
, jogging/running rose from over 5% in 1990 to below 15% in 2000, then
showed sligth
fluctuations and Correct your spelling
slight
close
the Wrong verb form
closed
period
with 15%.
On the other hand
, ball games began the period
as lead sport with nearly 35% of participation then
decreased dramatically to close 20% at the present day. Liwise
, biking/roller skating started as Correct your spelling
Likewise
second
Correct article usage
the second
popular
sport with 25%, Correct quantifier usage
most popular
then
felt
to Correct your spelling
fell
close
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a close
20
% in 2000 and rose Change preposition
to 20
insignificant
over 20%, Change the adjective
insignificantly
finally
decrease
below 20% Wrong verb form
decreasing
at the end
of the given period
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