The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

The line graph

illustrate

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illustrates

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the ratio of young people that

playing

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play

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different outdoor sports in four categories from 1900 to nowadays.

Overall

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swimming

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the swimming

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category show and rose significantly from 1990 to

Present

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the Present

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day, compared with ball games and biking/roller skating.

Whereas

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the group jogging/running rose

slight

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slightly

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in the given

period

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. Swimming started the

period

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below 15%,

then

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from 1995 to

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the present

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present

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the present

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increased

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increase

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increased

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constantly and

end

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ended

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the given

period

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as a lead of outdoor sports.

Similarly

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, jogging/running rose from over 5% in 1990 to below 15% in 2000,

then

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showed

sligth

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slight

fluctuations and

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closed

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the

period

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with 15%.

On the other hand

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, ball games began the

period

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as lead sport with nearly 35% of participation

then

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decreased dramatically to close 20% at the present day.

Liwise

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Likewise

, biking/roller skating started as

second

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the second

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popular

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0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

1. The best way to travel is travelling in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit making companies. Do you think the disadvantage of private health care outweigh the advantages.

You are currently taking a course at a university but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the university of Dean. In the letter: •Give details of your course •Explain why you need a week off •Say what you want the Dean to do.