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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel's facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

#minutes #holiday #australia #name #address #hotel #centre #sydney #information #availability #rooms #facilities #trips #brochure #sir #madam
Dear
Hotel
 Manager, I have been planning to visit Australia next week. I have been given feedback about your Paradise
Hotel
 through my friend. I am writing
this
 letter in regard to seek more information about your
hotel
 facilities and services. I would like you to ask about the
numbers
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number
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 of
room
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rooms
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availability
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 for six people.
Also
, I would like you to give me information about the price per night of deluxe and standard rooms.
In addition
, I am excited to learn more about other facilities
such
 as swimming or gaming
zone
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zones
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. The most important question to ask about food service
as
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is
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 I am a vegetarian, so I would like to know about
vegetarian
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the vegetarian
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 food menu. As my friend suggested
that
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the
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hotel
 will help their guests
for
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with
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 a day trip, so I would like more about a day trip and which attraction will be included. If possible, would you mind
to send
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sending
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 me
hotel
 brochures that would be great and helpful
.
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?
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 You can send me all
details
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the details
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 through email or post. I am looking forward to
hear
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hearing
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 from you. Best Regards, Urvashi
Submitted by bhavsar.urvashi on

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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