The diagrams below show stages in the erosion of a headland

The diagrams below show stages in the erosion of a headland
The diagrams show the changes that took place in the appearance of
headline
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headlines
show examples
as a result
of coastal erosion. Over time, the bottom areas of
headland
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the headland
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eroded
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are eroded
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by
sea water
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seawater
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causing
a
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the
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rock
weakened
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to weaken
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.
Furthermore
, the
weaken
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weakened
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part turns
in to
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into
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a cave shaped as an arch, which is
this
particular example can be seen in Durdle Door, Dorset. As the water beats against
roof
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the roof
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for some period, the area becomes divided from the main headland and
create
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creates
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a pile. Meanwhile, the headlined part retreating and stuck
remain
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remains
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smaller than
previous
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the previous
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shape.
This
mean that stone fell
in to
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into
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the sea
creates
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creating
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numbers of stump. It is clearly seen that
,
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apply
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the erosion has caused
headland
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the headland
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divided
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to divide
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into a pole affected by water, beating the roof continuously.
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