The chart illustrates the stages of production of electricity in a hydroelectric power station.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of
electricity
manufacture in a hydroelectric power
station
. Overall
, it is clear that
there are several stages in the production of electricity
. The process begins with intake
Correct article usage
the intake
water
and ends at the generator Change preposition
of water
power
station
.
Looking at the first
stage
of the
Correct article usage
apply
electricity
production, water
are
collected by Change the verb form
is
reservoiring
from Correct your spelling
reservoirs
reservoir
river
. At Add an article
the river
daytime
Add an article
the daytime
door
of the dam Correct article usage
the door
opened
and Wrong verb form
opens
water
Correct article usage
the water
are
Change the verb form
is
intaked
. In the second Correct your spelling
intake
intact
stage
, water
was flowed
to Change to the active voice
flowed
has flowed
generated
Wrong verb form
generate
electricity
at
Change preposition
during
daytime
. Next Correct article usage
the daytime
stage
, water
was flowed
into reversible turbines Wrong verb form
flows
at
Change preposition
during
daytime
which Correct article usage
the daytime
is
operated generator in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
power
Correct article usage
the power
station
and sent
Wrong verb form
send
electricity
to power
lines.
At the
night-time, the dam's door closed and Correct article usage
apply
water
was pumped from low-level
reservoir. Next Add an article
the low-level
a low-level
stage
, reversible turbines were pumped
Wrong verb form
pump
water
into high-level
reservoir to Correct article usage
a high-level
collected
Wrong verb form
collect
water
until next
Correct article usage
the next
electricity
production.
Finally
, there were 2 period
that relevant to Change to a plural noun
periods
process
of Add an article
the process
electricity
manufacture in a hydroelectric power
station
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, station, water, stage with synonyms.
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