the pie charts below shop the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts compare the amount of money spent on online shopping in retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
It is clear that
the proportion of consumers spending on books, films, and music had risen considerably from 2003 to 2013. While
others including travelling and clothes
sectors had seen a slight decline overall
in the same time period.
Looking at the details, in 2003, approximately 36% of the percentage of people purchasing tickets for travelling, whereas
films and music were just 21%. In contrast
, the proportion of sales in books and clothes
, with 19% and 24% respectively. Despite this
, online shopping for travelling and clothes
was preferred over others.
By 2013, there was a considerable increase in the proportion of people in films and music, rising by 33%. Similarly
, there was a rise slightly in the books sector of sales from 19% to 22%. While
, the percentage of revenues for clothes
and travelling witnessed significant declines, at 16% and 29% respectively.Submitted by baohoanguyenngoc1010 on
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