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Complain letter to airport manager about the services at the airport

#airport #manager #services
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction
about
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 the services I received at your
airport
. My name is Amrinder, and I was thrilled about my trip to Goa,
however
, the excitement turned into grave disappointment when I landed in Goa. I took the flight from Toronto Pearson
Airport
 to Goa International
Airport
 on the 13th of September. My flight number was A123.After
the
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 arrival, I was informed by the representative at the baggage collection
center
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 that my bags were missing.
Consequently
, I went to the 'Lost and Found' section to lodge the complaint where I was provided
me
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no assistance for about four hours
due to
lack
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 of staff. After the submission of
forms
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, I had to wait another few hours to acquire my luggage.
Hence
, I embarked
my
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 vacation with
this
 negative experience. As the
airport
 manager, I would like you to consider these issues seriously. In order to improve the services, you could take the suggestion of hiring people into consideration. Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I look forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Am my.
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