The diagrams below shows time spent watching tv by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of time spent in seeing television by age and gender in Britain, in two years, 1995 and 1999.
Overall
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it is clear that
the highest number in assigning time for watching TV was in elderly people (65 and above), Linking Words
while
, the lowest was in Linking Words
children
age Correct article usage
the children
group
(4 to 15). Use synonyms
Also
, we can see that the ratio kept fluctuating in both years for both men and women.
In the year 1995, the Linking Words
percentage
of women observing television skyrocketed in all categories except for the kids Use synonyms
group
(4 to 15), Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the boys
boys
Change noun form
boys'
boy's
percentage
was a bit higher, with almost 28 hours each week.
In comparison, in the year 1999, the proportion of ladies and gentlemen kept fluctuating throughout the years. In the age Use synonyms
group
of elderly peopleUse synonyms
,
and kids Remove the comma
apply
group
, it can be seen that the male Use synonyms
percentage
was slightly higher than the female Use synonyms
percentage
, Use synonyms
while
in the rest of the categories, the female ratio was higher.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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