The diagrams below shows time spent watching tv by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of time spent in seeing television by age and gender in Britain, in two years, 1995 and 1999.
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest number in assigning time for watching TV was in elderly people (65 and above), while
, the lowest was in children
age Correct article usage
the children
group
(4 to 15). Also
, we can see that the ratio kept fluctuating in both years for both men and women.
In the year 1995, the percentage
of women observing television skyrocketed in all categories except for the kids group
(4 to 15), Correct article usage
the boys
boys
Change noun form
boys'
boy's
percentage
was a bit higher, with almost 28 hours each week.
In comparison, in the year 1999, the proportion of ladies and gentlemen kept fluctuating throughout the years. In the age group
of elderly people,
and kids Remove the comma
apply
group
, it can be seen that the male percentage
was slightly higher than the female percentage
, while
in the rest of the categories, the female ratio was higher.Submitted by sherifF
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