ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the total spending on three different categories by British people of various
age
groups
in 2004. Upon reviewing the chart, it can be observed that the highest proportion of money was spent on purchasing food and drinks products, and
this
expenditure increased steadily with
age
groups
, starting at approximately 7 per cent for individuals under 30 and reaching nearly 23% for those aged 76 and above.
According to
the provided information, individuals under 30 allocated a significant amount of money to the restaurants and hotels category in 2004.
Furthermore
, individuals in the
age
group of 31 to 45 and 46 to 60 had nearly identical expenditures in the same category,
whereas
there was a substantial difference between the
age
groups
under 30 to 60 and 61 to 75-year-old British people. Elderly citizens in the
age
group of 61 to 75 spent only 2% on restaurants and hotels.
On the other hand
, similar to the food and drink category, expenditure on entertainment witnessed a significant increase with
age
groups
, starting at nearly 7% for youngsters and reaching approximately 23% for those aged 76 and above.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • categories
  • age groups
  • residents
  • United Kingdom
  • steady increase
  • marked decrease
  • peak
  • age bracket
  • lower spending
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