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The two pie charts electronics and home furnishings sectors
gives
information about how online shopping changed for retail trade in Change the verb form
give
canada
in 2005 and 2010.
In general, we can see that Change the capitalization
Canada
proportion
in Correct article usage
the proportion
two
sectors tended to be better off thanCorrect article usage
the two
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the
fall
in 2010.
As is presented in the pie charts for home furnishings changes was not for the benefit, the indicator in 2005 was about one in four decreased to 15% in comparison with food and beverage. Which is Verb problem
apply
move
upward from almost 22 per cent. Correct article usage
a move
Furthermore
, the number of people who did shopping rised
only five per cent of video games between 2005 and 2010. Meanwhile, for electronics and Wrong verb form
rose to
Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
appliance
the Add a comma
appliance,
patternappers
to be slightly Correct your spelling
pattern appears
same
. In 2005, Correct article usage
the same
the
most people did online shopping in Correct article usage
apply
this
category, but in 2010 the most saled
sector was food and beverage.Correct your spelling
sold
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