The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 120 words.
The given line chart described
population
in the three Correct article usage
the population
city
(Change to a plural noun
cities
Columbia
, Yamhill
, Washington) where
Correct word choice
that
belong
to Wrong verb form
belonged
state
of Oregon between 1940 and 2000 (in Correct article usage
the state
thousands
). In general
over six decades, Washington’s Add a comma
general,
population
has bigger
number than Add an article
a bigger
Yamhil
and Correct your spelling
Yamhill
Columbia
.
Overall
, the number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
population
for Columbia
, Yamhill
and Washington over six decades increased in number with high
pace of growth in Washington Add an article
the high
a high
city
.
It can be shown in the graph, there was Capitalize word
City
an
gradual Change the article
a
increased
in Washington’s Replace the word
increase
population
from approximately 75 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
to over 120 thousand people
from 1940 to 1970 then
it rose dramatically almost doubled
to 240 Wrong verb form
doubling
thousands
by 2000.
Change to singular
thousand
Meanwhile
there was a similar Add a comma
Meanwhile,
climbed
pattern for Replace the word
climbing
Yamhill
city
and Capitalize word
City
Columbia
city
. It is clear from Capitalize word
City
figure
both Correct article usage
the figure
Yamhill
and Columbia
started at same
Correct article usage
the same
population
nearly 30 thousands
by 1940 and Change to singular
thousand
then
they climbed slowly almost 45 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
and over 30 thousand respectively. Furthermore
, they soared significantly doubled to just over 90 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
for Yamhill
and over 60 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
for Columbia
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, city, columbia, yamhill, thousands, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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