The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data provides information on how the total world

energy

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consumption and electricity

generation

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were distributed

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year.

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, most of the consumed

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came from fossil fuels

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as oil and gas,

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, in terms of electricity

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, coal was the largest

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in terms of

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. Almost

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one third

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of the whole

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consumption is dominated by oil,

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, only 6.7% of it is generated.

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, coal, which is the second largest consumed

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(25,1%), is the biggest generated

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(39,8%) surpassing others.

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comes to gas,

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amounts in both cases are similar, reaching approximately twenty

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, which makes it the only

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with

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qualities. It is evident, that hydro power

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nuclear power are generated more than consumed worldwide. Their consumption stays under 7% and

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is around 16% percent. What stands out, is the percentages of combustible renewables and waste, which is consumed very little and not generated at all.

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