The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data provides information on how the total world

energy

consumption and electricity

generation

were distributed

last

year.

Overall

, most of the consumed

energy

came from fossil fuels

such

as oil and gas,

however

, in terms of electricity

generation

, coal was the largest

one

in terms of

generation

. Almost

one third

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of the whole

energy

consumption is dominated by oil,

nevertheless

, only 6.7% of it is generated.

In contrast

, coal, which is the second largest consumed

energy

(25,1%), is the biggest generated

one

(39,8%) surpassing others.

What

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When

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comes to gas,

it's

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its

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amounts in both cases are similar, reaching approximately twenty

percent

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per cent

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, which makes it the only

one

with

such

qualities. It is evident, that hydro power

as well as

nuclear power are generated more than consumed worldwide. Their consumption stays under 7% and

generation

is around 16% percent. What stands out, is the percentages of combustible renewables and waste, which is consumed very little and not generated at all.

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