The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data illustrates the changes in the layout of Lynwish College taken place since 2006.

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, the site has undergone several changes the major ones being the construction of

cafeteria

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a cafeteria

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and new

sport

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sports

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facilities

as well as

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and

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the development of a new transportation option. Since 2006, a significant part of green areas have been removed to construct new facilities.

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, the new extended library has been built between two college buildings.

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its old

place

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place,

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a new sports centre has been opened

in addition

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to the original sports field nearby. In terms of transportation, a car park has been cut in size to fit a new bike storage for students to safely store their vehicles. To the north, a new path has been created to connect the campus with the new bus stop providing a new transportation option. It has

also

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become easier for people to eat and buy lunch these days

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since at the centre of the campus a new cafeteria has been built. Previously there were only a few

road

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roads

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connecting college facilities.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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