The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data illustrates the changes in the layout of Lynwish College taken place since 2006.

Overall

, the site has undergone several changes the major ones being the construction of

cafeteria

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a cafeteria

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and new

sport

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sports

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facilities

as well as

and

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the development of a new transportation option. Since 2006, a significant part of green areas have been removed to construct new facilities.

For instance

, the new extended library has been built between two college buildings.

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its old

place

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place,

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a new sports centre has been opened

in addition

to the original sports field nearby. In terms of transportation, a car park has been cut in size to fit a new bike storage for students to safely store their vehicles. To the north, a new path has been created to connect the campus with the new bus stop providing a new transportation option. It has

also

become easier for people to eat and buy lunch these days

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since at the centre of the campus a new cafeteria has been built. Previously there were only a few

road

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roads

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connecting college facilities.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

177 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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