The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 amd 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compparisons where relevent.
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The bar chart depicts the export
value
of one country between 2015 and 2016, the figures are given in billion dollars. The categories can divided into 5 groups as
petroleum Change preposition
apply
products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellwery
, agricultural Correct your spelling
jewellery
products
, and textilles
.
It can be seen that petroleum goods were the most of Correct your spelling
textiles
value
of the export over the period, Correct article usage
the value
while
textiles and agriculture products
were the lowest value
in 2016.
From the
data shows, energy Change preposition
The
products
were the highest thoughtout
the giving time by Correct your spelling
throughout
started
at 60 in 2015 and Change the form of the verb
starting
climbed
up to nearly 63 in 2016. Wrong verb form
climbing
Similarly
, Engineered things which were the secondary export value
stayed at close to 60 in year
2015 Change the article
the year
then
slightly grew to around 62% in Correct word choice
and then
year
2016. By the way, even though farmer foods and clothing goods had a slight increase from 30 and around 28 in 2015 to nearly 30 in 2016, there were still the Change the article
the year
lowest
Add a hyphen
lowest-value
value
products
in these categories.Submitted by ChampJT on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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