Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when | they are used as money-making of attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when | they are used as

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attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only

way

to save these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion Nowadays

culture

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the culture

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is used to attract

tourisme

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tourists

, some believe it is a great idea to save

culture

whereas

, others say it will destroy it . I personally with

culture

to making

money

it is the best

way

to save it

Firstly

, if cultural and traditional places are used as tourist locations it would lead to destroying them .

In other words

, visitors from all over the world will visit the

location's

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and

due to

huge

use

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the traditional items may

will

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be destroyed.

For instance

, I visited Sultan Qaboos

fort

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last

month it is one of the famous places and the place was dirty and crowded.

In addition

,the

culture

may

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by the

visiters

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visitors

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who are from different cultures and lose their unique value.

This

logic means using

culture

to

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money

will harm the

culture

's hardly.

On the other hand

, the other argument is the only

way

to save antique pieces is using

cultural

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due to

it needs special care and a large amount of

money

so tourism can be used as a resource to get

money

then

using

this

money

to save and ticketing care of

culture

.

However

, I believe

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traditional as maney making to save

culture

becomes if they need to preserve

culture

means they need to build museums and professional workers and all

this

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services require large amounts of

money

.

For example

, the survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed that the government

spend

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more than 1000 Omani real to save

culture

.

Therefore

, if they refuse

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making

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culture

as

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resource

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it will be

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harmful

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harm

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harmful

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for

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the government budget to keep spending all

this

money

on

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culture

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cultural

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. In conclusion,

although

some argue that cultural traditions may be destroyed when used

as

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money

making , I think it is the best

way

to preserve

cultural

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culture

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because

of

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preserving

expensive

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is expensive

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and without using

cutler

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a cutler

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to make

money

will be difficult to

saving

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save

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traditional.