Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

believe that the past prisoners who, after exiting, have become an example in

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society,

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the best options to be the ones who talk to teenagers warning the problems,

consequently

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executing a crime. I totally agree with

this

opinion, as these old criminals have experienced terrible years in jail, and teenagers could be in similar situations. First of all, the most important argument is the fact that these

people

who talk to young guys have had a personal experience, which helps

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precised

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details of the horrible times in

prison

,

trials

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, …

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a murderer

which

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is regretful of his actions after his

prison

exit

,

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could tell the teens the

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of friends and

people

you lose, the terrifying violence in

prison

rounded my many murderers and rapists.

As a result

of these talks, the teenagers reflect and understand the problem a crime provides.

Secondly

, adolescents may find it easier to relate to someone who has gone through a similar path. The lawbreakers

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the same age as the young listeners, so they could explain the feelings and thoughts they had at their age,

therefore

will provoke that the audience

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attentive and focused on what

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saying.

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, a boy who has already had many problems listens to the talk and compares it to his situation and would warn him and think about it before pursuing the wrong life path. To summarize, I hardly agree with the fact that the

people

who have been in

prison

and

then

have become great examples, give talks to adolescents.

This

is because these

people

would tell their personal stories, would have a big weight

likewise

that the listeners could relate their past actions with the

criminal’s

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and would provoke a deep reflection before committing any illegal act.