TASK 1 : 150 WORDS Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear Sir or Madam, I am the father of one of your students
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Gibsy Wong, and I am writing to ask about the possibility of joining you on a trip to Thailand that the school has conducted. I would like to accompany your team as it will allow me to visit Thailand, which once upon a time used to be the rich culture in southeast
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, and have many attractive places to visit and many exciting activities. I
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want to be on the team to have a great time, and that too with my son.
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friend of mine with whom I studied together at a foreign university who is originally from Thailand. By the way, including me in your team would certainly be an advantage because I can speak Thai.
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know how to prepare some quick snacks in case they get hungry.
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, I have a friendly personality and share funny and interesting stories with them. But, before I really want to join, I have a couple of questions to ask. Will I be allowed to Samutprakarn around in the city separately with my son? Will there be other staff members with us to help the children? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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sincerely,
Krittipong
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  • enthusiastic
  • valuable experience
  • expertise
  • educational objectives
  • supervision
  • ensure safety
  • bonding
  • workshops
  • logistics
  • coordinates
  • travel arrangements
  • clear communication
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • manage schedules
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