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Thediagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electicity

The chart describes the way to generate electricity by using geothermal energy. When looking at the diagram it can be clearly seen the geothermal power station has four main units: the cold
water
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 storage tank, the injection well, the production well, the condenser and two equipment, the turbine and the
generator
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. The tank stores cool
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, and the condenser, turbine and
generator
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 are established on the ground
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 the two storage units are situated under the ground parallel to each other. In the beginning, the liquid stored at normal temperature is pumped down into the injection well
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 built 4.5 Km away from the ground level.After that
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 runs through a tunnel, constructed in the area mainly containing hot rocks in order to heat
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 at its boiling point.
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 boiled
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 is
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 stocked in a production well. The next step
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 aims to produce steam from hot
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,
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 pumped up to the condenser on the earth.
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 steam is used to operate turbines which give power to the
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. In the final stage, electricity is produced by the
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 and distributed to consumers.

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