All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Nations worldwide are dealing with the increasing issue of obesity.

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is a cause for concern for all age groups There are two main causes, over-consumption of fast

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and lack of exercise. Possible solutions would be a government tax on fast

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and special incentives for gym membership to get

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exercising One of the reasons that

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are becoming overweight these days is that they are eating more junk

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, ready meals and convenience

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rather than cooking healthy meals at home.

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is because many

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tend to lead a busy life after a long day at

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it is easier to just buy ready meals in the supermarket or get a takeaway.

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, In the UK, sales of these types of

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have risen considerably since 1990,

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busy

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seeing cooking at home as time-consuming. To tackle

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issue the government should take steps to increase the tax on

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, high sugar or unhealthy

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.

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, consumers would think twice about the

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they consume, which could lead to them losing weight. Another problem that needs to be considered is the lack of exercise.

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of leading a hectic life with pressures at

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, many

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are just too tired to go to the gym or join a sports club.

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, after a hard day at

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, most

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prefer to just come home and sit in front of the TV.

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, when

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have time off they tend to relax rather than go to a gym. One possible solution is for employers to consider the health and

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of their employees and offer in-house company gyms or special incentives,

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as discounts to join a sports or fitness club. If

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is implemented it would have a positive effect on

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health and a reduction in weight gain. In conclusion, being overweight is an increasing issue because of

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of fast

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and convenience

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foods

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and not enough exercise

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work

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commitments. The government needs to look at taxing fast

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and companies should set up incentives for gyms, sports or fitness clubs.