The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.
The pie graphs depict information about the different types of
energy producing
Add a hyphen
energy-producing
show examples
percentages from a country over a 20-year period, starting from 1983.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest amount of
energy
produced from the oil than any other.
Further
, Hydropower stood
same
Correct article usage
the same
show examples
from the beginning. Looking at the data sets in more detail, it is evident that the percentage of hydropower released
competitively
Add a missing verb
was competitively
show examples
lower than any other
energy
source, which is 4% and remained
same
Correct article usage
the same
show examples
both in 1983 and 2003.
However
, the proportions of Oil
energy
generated 42% in 1983,
whereas
it decreased to 38% in 2003 but created the most amount of
energy
among others. Turning to the remaining data sets in more detail, it is shown that Nuclear power increased from 1983 to 2003, at about 20% to 24%. The figure for the Coal
energy
decreased its production proportions, from 23% in 1983 to 13% in 2003.
Last
but not least, Natural Gas rose dramatically from 11% to 20% within 20 years.
Submitted by salimmd9111 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: