The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006
The chart below illustrates the dates about the age of
mothers
in Australia when they have
their early Wrong verb form
had
baby
in three different Fix the agreement mistake
babies
years
; 1966, 1986 and 2006. The figures for female giving birth to their early baby are shown in percentage.
Overall
, it is obvious that the number of person who gave birth to their first
kid is
Verb problem
has
decreasing
over the Wrong verb form
decreased
40
Correct word choice
last 40
years
. In the given years
the less indicator is mothers
who had their first
baby when they were over 40 years
old.
When it comes to young mothers
who were under 19 years
gave birth to their first
child in 1966 with nearly 35% while
the statistic reduced by 15% in the next 20 years
as well as
continued to decline till 2006. The number of women who decided to be a mother for the early time was less than 10% between 1966 and 2006. The figures for female
between 30 and 34 Fix the agreement mistake
females
years
were
almost 13% and it is noticed an increase of 6% in 1986, Correct word choice
old were
however
, it reached its peak at approximately 45% in the last
given year.
Women in Australia who were in their 19-24 age achieved a top with slightly more than 60% in 1966 while
the number roughly halved after 40 years
. There experienced a gradual increase in indicators of mothers
with their first
kid between 25 and 30 years
in the first
and last
given year which is less than 40%, however
, it halved by 50% in 1986. Australian women with their first
kid were about 8% in 1966 and the dates went up dramatically during the given period and reached nearly 30% after 40 years
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