The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The diagram depicts the way in which
electricity
is produced through a particular system which is called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
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Overall
, there are three key stages in order to convert seawater into Linking Words
electricity
, commencing with Use synonyms
evaporation
, generating Use synonyms
electricity
and condensation.
In the initial stage, warm seawater which has a temperature of 29 Celsius is converted into Use synonyms
water
vapor by solar energy. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, it is evacuated in an Linking Words
evaporation
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chamber
in order to produce saltless Use synonyms
water
vapour. Use synonyms
While
the waste liquid in the Linking Words
evaporation
Use synonyms
chamber
is extracted to be salt, the saltless Use synonyms
water
vapour afterwards turns the turbine creating Use synonyms
electricity
.
In the meantime, Cold seawater which has a lower temperature (5 Celsius in 1000-meter depth) flows into the surrounding condensing Use synonyms
chamber
. It is combined with the Use synonyms
water
waste from the Use synonyms
evaporation
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chamber
in order to contribute Use synonyms
Change preposition
to as
as
cooling system. The waste salt Correct your spelling
a
water
in Use synonyms
this
cycle is Linking Words
then
flowed Linking Words
while
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water
vapour from the turbine is condensed in the Use synonyms
chamber
, resulting in pure Use synonyms
water
which could be utilised as drinking Use synonyms
water
.Use synonyms
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