The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The diagram depicts the way in which
electricity
is produced through a particular system which is called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
Overall
, there are three key stages in order to convert seawater into
electricity
, commencing with
evaporation
, generating
electricity
and condensation. In the initial stage, warm seawater which has a temperature of 29 Celsius is converted into
water
vapor by solar energy.
Subsequently
, it is evacuated in an
evaporation
chamber
in order to produce saltless
water
vapour.
While
the waste liquid in the
evaporation
chamber
is extracted to be salt, the saltless
water
vapour afterwards turns the turbine creating
electricity
. In the meantime, Cold seawater which has a lower temperature (5 Celsius in 1000-meter depth) flows into the surrounding condensing
chamber
. It is combined with the
water
waste from the
evaporation
chamber
in order to contribute
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cooling system. The waste salt
water
in
this
cycle is
then
flowed
while
water
vapour from the turbine is condensed in the
chamber
, resulting in pure
water
which could be utilised as drinking
water
.
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