The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The diagram depicts the way in which
electricity
is produced through a particular system which is called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
Overall
, there are three key stages in order to convert seawater into electricity
, commencing with evaporation
, generating electricity
and condensation.
In the initial stage, warm seawater which has a temperature of 29 Celsius is converted into water
vapor by solar energy. Subsequently
, it is evacuated in an evaporation
chamber
in order to produce saltless water
vapour. While
the waste liquid in the evaporation
chamber
is extracted to be salt, the saltless water
vapour afterwards turns the turbine creating electricity
.
In the meantime, Cold seawater which has a lower temperature (5 Celsius in 1000-meter depth) flows into the surrounding condensing chamber
. It is combined with the water
waste from the evaporation
chamber
in order to contribute Change preposition
to as
as
cooling system. The waste salt Correct your spelling
a
water
in this
cycle is then
flowed while
water
vapour from the turbine is condensed in the chamber
, resulting in pure water
which could be utilised as drinking water
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