In many countries, fewer and fewer people go to universities to study science. What's the reason for this? What can be done to encourage people to learn science?

These days, people are likely to select the common
subject
that is
available and learn an easy rather than harder one. But what is the most effective method for dealing with those people who are afraid to see out of the box? Some people believe that
science
is
necessary
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subject
that requires advanced knowledge and time to acquire not everyone can
achieve
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. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the
arguments
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and draw a conclusion. First of all, private institutions are
huge
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costly to cover
tution
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tuition
fees for
science
subjects.
For example
, living in a poor family can be hard enough to pay the fees where not only
tution
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tuition
fees but
also
have to pay additional
fess
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fees
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for use. If they can't afford
then
they have to choose other options which are low cost.
Secondly
, some institutions in poor countries have
low
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amount of subjects to study. Where
students
need to take that
subject
to finish higher studies and move forward. Take
country
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the country
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of
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for an example where not only vast universities but
also
teachers who are well knowledgeable in
such
areas are not available to give better education.
On the other hand
, there is a common belief that reducing costs and putting scholarships in academic
area
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can be a positive way to encourage
students
to admit
students
to their chosen
subject
. To be more precise,
students
mostly see where privilege is available so it can be best to give funding to
students
who wish to continue studies in
science
.
As a result
vast amount of
students
will come out of
science
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the science
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field.
Additionally
, universities promote that
science
is not only one area to study,
inside
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it has
others
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fields for learning
such
as engineering, medicine etc. Advertising on TV channels,
online
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and online
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media can be
good
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way to view the message to future
students
as an encouragement. In conclusion,
although
it is a common thought
Science
is hard
but
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by
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accumulating knowledge can give
students
lots of opportunities to go into
jobs
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sector
as well as
can invention new things.
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