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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph describes the total
number
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 of
speakers
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, including the
number
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 of
the
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native
speakers
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 and the
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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. The information includes six languages,
such
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 as Mandarin Chinese, Hindi, Spanish,
English
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, Arabic, and
Portugese
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Portuguese
.
Overall
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, it is evident that Mandarin Chinese is the
language
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 with the biggest
number
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 of native
speakers
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,
at
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with
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 approximately 900
million
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speakers
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. Other than Mandarin Chinese, the other five languages are spoken by around 300
million
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 native
speakers
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 on average. Most of the languages are spoken more by their native
speakers
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 than
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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, except for
English
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. Interestingly, there are twice
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number
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the number
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 of
speakers
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 who speak
English
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 as their additional
language
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 than those who speak
English
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 as their main
language
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. In conclusion,
English
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 is a very popular
language
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, resulting in a huge
number
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 of
speakers
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 who speak
English
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 not as their main
language
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, reaching
to
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around 600
million
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 people.
In contrast
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, only a tiny fraction of people speak
Portugese
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Portuguese
 as their additional
language
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,
amounted
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which amounted
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 to only around 10
million
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speakers
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, speakers, language, english, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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