The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The illustration demonstrates the different

stages

of consumer goods manufacturing and the

process

of information

feedback

. At first

glance

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it is clear that

the

overall

process

contains more than ten

stages

. The linear diagram is shown by

flow

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the flow

a flow

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of information

feedback

and

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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process

. The first

stage

of

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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process

began

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when raw materials and manufactured components are sorted out

to

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the

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storage.

Then

it goes through production planning

along with

the design which was made by product research. At the third

stage

assembly and inspection occurs. If the testing is positive the

process

continues by packaging equipment. In the

last

stages

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it despatches and goes to the sales. The

process

of information

feedback

involves

less

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stages

than the other one.

First

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feedback

happens at the second

stage

of manufacturing, production planning, where it sends

feedback

to storage.

Then

at the

stage

of sales, testing, and market

research

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the

process

repeat

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again.