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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trenda and fashions than what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#hobbies #interests #change #time #reflection #trenda #fashions #individuals
Nowadays, new generations are more addicted to social media trends rather than having their own identity, where we can find young ones
follow
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 the herd
while
 choosing their hobbies
instead
 of selecting an activity that they are really interested in. In my opinion, I believe that one should have
their
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prefered
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preferred
 hobbies that could live
along with
 them and won't fade
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by
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 time. One of the most famous reasons, that people would be enrolled into a sport or adopt a specific hobby is to get to meet new people or build new friendships,
while
 feeling as part of the group not being left behind.
Therefore
, some would join a class or show interest in something just to have new friends.
Unfortuently
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Unfortunately
, these activities sometimes are famous because of trends or social media and will fade away
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 time. Eventually, Ones will lose their identity and will be involved in
activity
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 that they don't like just to fit in. On the other side, we should encourage our children from
young
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ages
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 to know their interests and support them to evolve
it
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.
Thus
, they can grow into something that they really like and enjoy and have partners that
are actually have
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 common hobbies rather than fake ones.
Moreover
, when they get to develop a skill from the early
beginings
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beginning
, they can have it as
career
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on
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 the long term and get to work in something that they really enjoy. In conclusion, we shouldn't be dragged into social media trends ,
instead
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 we should emphasize our own talents and improve
it
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.
Accordingly
, I strongly recommend that for
pre-school
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 age we
enroll
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 our infants
into
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activties
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activities
 that
matches
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 their interests.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reflection of trends
  • Personal preferences
  • Social media influencers
  • Technological advancements
  • Generational shifts
  • Marketing and advertising
  • Traditional vs. modern hobbies
  • Societal expectations
  • Economic factors
  • Psychological need
  • Belonging and acceptance
  • Accessible
  • Affordable
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