This line chart diagram depicts that the number of teenagers in UK follow habit of eating vegetables.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of teenagers from
UK
who are following a vegetable diet between 1960 and 2020.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, the number
of young people who eat a vegetable diet has encountered big variations in the given period. The number
grew constantly until 1980 ,when it reached its peak.
Starting from 1960, when there were no teenagers who follow
a vegetable diet, Wrong verb form
followed
this
number
has
increased constantly until 1980 , Unnecessary verb
apply
whe
it reached its peak of over 15% of the young population. Correct your spelling
when
where
Then
, an upward trend has
followed , until mid 90 , when Unnecessary verb
apply
this
number
was a bit over 4%.
Nevertheless
, near 2000 , more and more teenagers started to follow a habit of eating vegetables, and this
number
has
started to grow again , at a constant rate until 2000, starting from just over 5% in 2000, and reaching nearly 10% in 2020.Unnecessary verb
apply
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