Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, there are a lot of families where both working parents should decide who should take

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of their

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. Some individuals are of the opinion that family

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are the best caretakers,

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others hold the view that

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centres

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can offer the best

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. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both opinions. I, personally side with the latter view. On the one hand, family

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like

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may take good

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of the younger generation. Most of the time

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are very faithful and kind to their offspring, so they will give a maximum effort. It is well-known by a lot of people that grandchildren who are responsible for their

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never starve, because the older generation always put eating well

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the first place to raise a healthy child.

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, one of the important things to mention is how

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play a big role in building strong family values and connections. A child who was raised by grannies will appreciate family bonds and know the most essential about their natives.

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,

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are

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a great choice for parents, because most of

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employees in

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are professional workers who were taught to take

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of

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.

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centres

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can provide a kid with a

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education, which is a fine way of giving

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opportunities for a bright future.

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, in a century of technology kids at specialised

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like kindergarten or preschool can be watched by a parent at any time of the day anywhere. Kindergartens have an up to a standard schedule that includes special games to improve

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logical thinking, and afternoon sleep that gives vitamins and time for relaxation.

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, in comparison with family

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day

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centres

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' workers are prepared to face any kind of circumstances and situations where first aid is needed. To summarise, family

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are the best at teaching babies about morality, but

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services are the right choice for parents because of the professional benefits they offer. From my perspective, the latter one

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is much better cared

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for

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, because of all the right things a child takes from it,

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it prepares a young person for a big world's principles and requirements.