The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The following two plans illustrate the information about the Central Library in the present situation and the previous situation within 20 years.
Overall
, some facilities have been obtained within two decades of the period.
In the beginning, it clearly shows that,
there were tables and chairs in the middle Remove the comma
apply
area
of the past and in the present it has been removed and used as a free area
. The CDs, videos and computer games area
has been removed and the particular area
has been occupied for Children's fiction books
and Storytelling events. The relevant. room
has been enlarged and additionally
, two sofas has
been added to the Change the verb form
have
area
. There was an enquiry desk in the southeast corner and it has been replaced by a Cafe and the room
design has been changed.
In addition
to that, the Reading room
and Children's books
room
have been replaced with a Computer room
and lecture room
respectively. There was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
a
adult fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
in the west and east area
of the plan and the west area
has been
converted to all reference Wrong verb form
was
books
and the other side has been
occupied by an information desk, adult fiction Wrong verb form
was
books
and self-service machines.
In conclusion, The Central library has modernized and some facilities have been added with the technology
developments.Replace the word
technological
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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