in the past role of teachers was to provide information. today students have access to wide sources of information there is therefore no role of teacher in modern education. do you agree or disagree?

it is sometimes argued that
teachers
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academic environment
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is available everywhere in its bits and bytes.
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my opinion,
teachers
will play more crucial roles in the future as
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needto
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need to
offer every student a rich,rewarding,and a unique learning experience over
information
and knowledge. there are three main reasons why
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would argue against underestimating
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significance
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academic
field.
firstly
,
students
themselves may find it hard to grab the
information
they need when snowed under with massive learning
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resources
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web pages, forums etc
by contrast
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teacher knows what
information
to choose
according to
student needs and abilities to understand.
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slected
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selected
materials save
students
time and help them learning productively.
besides
,
while
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instructing
isn't the priority for
information
,the future
teachers
' most important role is to get to
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as an
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individual
in order to
comprehendhis
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comprehend his
or her unique needs,learning style,social and cultural
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background
,
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and abilities.
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essential part would not be achieved without talented and patience educators.
for example
,in America,some pioneer
teachers
have taken methods to make
students
passionated.participants in the
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instructional
process by providing project-based participatory,educational adventures.
finally
,schooling doesn't only consist of imparting knowledge.it
also
tells young people moral values
such
as tolerance,respect,sharing and honesty.
teachers
are the role models of young
students
in the formative ages. in conclusion,despite
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technologies
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convenience to obtain
information
as needed,real
teachers
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be substituted and they will be
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part of future education.
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