The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph depicts tertiary
education
students in Britain based on their terms of educational involvement for the years 1970, 1980 and 1990 respectively. This
also
illustrates their genders for the above details.
It can be clearly observed that the men
who do their Correct quantifier usage
number of men
further
education
full-time has declined over time, while
for women, this
is the other way around. However
, both genders doing part-time education
have increased over time.
There has been a growth of female post-graduates in Britain over the last
three decades. For instance
, in 1970, only 700 followed full-time education
. But by 1990, it was almost 1100 which was a significant development. Moreover
, there was an upward trend for part-time female graduates as well. From 1970 to 1990 this
increased at least four times.
On the other hand
, males were more into perpetual learning in 1970 which was exactly 1000, but it has fallen up to around 825 in 1980. But again showed an upward trend in 1990 with 900 people pursuing continuous study load. In contrast
, half-time scholars appear to have doubled during the 30 years.Submitted by prarthana1r on
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