Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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The relationship

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is an important part of our everyday life. Some people claim that giving gifts and presents is important to

support

relationship

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relationships

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between family and

friends

while

other

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others

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argue that there are better ways to show affection to them.

To

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In

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my personal point of view, giving presents is a good way to

support

relationship

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a relationship

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but at the same

time

, we should remember other ways of caring

them

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for them

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such

as spending free

time

and talking with close ones. On the one hand, everyone

like

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likes

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give

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to give

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and receive presents. It makes us

feeling

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feel

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special and glorious. It is a feeling that came from our childhood. One of the best

example

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is presents that children receive

them

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apply

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for

Birthday

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birthdays

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,

or

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apply

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Christmas or any other special events. In

this

way, parents or relatives show their love and care about them.

Additionally

, in our elderly

life

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lives

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, we love to share the same feelings with

friends

and colleagues.

On the other hand

, relatives and

friends

require other kinds of care. It is important to spend your free

time

with family, be helpful

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friends

and be ready to come and

support

them in their difficult situations. My father is a good example to

support

this

point of view. I learned a lot from him. He is always ready to help. Once my uncle got in

the

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car accident and lost his arm, my father had been communicating and spending free

time

with him for nearly two months to make him feel better To summarize all mentioned above, giving presents to

friends

and family is important. It supports the

relationship

with each other. But despite

this

fact, it is crucial to communicate with them,

spending

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your free

time

and be ready to come in their difficult

time