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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in

#move #apartment #month #landlord #•explain #situation #•describe #•tell
Dear Mr. Simmons, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I will not be able to
shift
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move
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 to the apartment that I took on rent the previous month
due to
 a medical emergency
along with
 an official reason.
Firstly
, I had an accident
last
 week on 15th September 2023
while
 I was coming from the market after purchasing some essentials. My bike got severely hit by a fast-running car and I have got a fractured bone
along with
 stitches on my head. The doctor had strictly advised me a bed rest at least for twenty days.
Furthermore
, the project for which I was shifting to your city has been postponed for one month.It will resume on 15th November 2023.
Thus
, I will not be able to stay in your rented room for the next two months. But, I will shift after two months before
mentioned
Add an article
the mentioned
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 date. As I have deposited my money in advance, Could you please re-adjust it with a later payment?
This
 will help me a lot in many ways as I have already lost my money in the treatment. I will be grateful to you for understanding my problem. Yours Sincerely, Matt Donovan
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