The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
The given bar chart illustrates the differences in
percentage
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the percentage
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of Australian and non-Australian
citizens
in cities, rural
areas
and towns over 15 years from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, the number of
people
living in urban
areas
increased dramatically for both those who were born in Australia and those who were born outside over the given period.
However
, the figure for rural
areas
declined sharply,
whereas
the figure for towns remained steady.  
Initially
, the number of native Australian
citizens
and immigrants in cities, which were about 45 and 60 (respectively),  increased by about 20% and became 64% and 80% between 1995 and 2010. For all
people
in towns, there were no significant changes and the figure remained almost steady. 
On the other hand
,
people
born in Australia in rural
areas
accounted for approximately 30%,
while
outside-born
people
comprised almost 40% in 1995. The number declined sharply and became above 20% for local
citizens
and even less for non-Australian
citizens
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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