The graph below shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012
The bar graph illustrates the levels of males and females who are playing sport in an area of England in 2012. In general, the figures for boys who attend most of the sports activities except for badminton and swimming were higher than girls.
Furthermore
, Hockey was the least popular for both genders.
The highest level of boys was registered by football, accounting for 60. The next highest numbers were exhibited by tennis, at 50, and swimming, at 40. In contrast
, badminton and cycling were the least common, with 30 and approximately 40 people
, respectively.
Regarding females, the rate of swimming favourite in the town stood first place, accounting for 50 people
. Furthermore
, the levels of girls participating in badminton were 40, which was higher than tennis, at over 30 people
; meanwhile, cycling and football accounted for a similar number of joining (20 people
). Finally
, Hockey was the lowest level in both genders, at 15 and nearly 10 people
, respectively.Submitted by lethigialinh77 on
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