The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of
time
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consumed by workers on various activities in a specific country between 1958 and 2008.
Overall
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, in both years, the most
time
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-consuming activity was working,
while
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travelling for work, playing sports and other interests were the least popular. For all types of activities, there were no significant changes over the past 50 years.
Initially
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, working
time
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comprised 33% in 1958 and had an increase of 9% to 42% in 2008,
whereas
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hours spent relaxing at home accounted for 8% and rose slightly to 13% by the second year.
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, there was a marginal growth in
time
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spent on job travel
as well as
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in playing sports or other activities, which were 2% and 6%, respectively, and both grew up to 8% over the period.
On the other hand
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, sleeping declined sharply, from 32% in 1958 to around 25% in 2008;
furthermore
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,
Time
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spent going out with family or friends decreased by 13% eventually.
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