Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinon.
There are abundant debates about the advancement effects of technology on the world.Some individuals opine that
by
living Change preposition
apply
a
uncomplicated life will safeguard Change the article
an
environment
,Add an article
the environment
whereas
,others believe that innovation in the field of science will tackle Linking Words
this
challenge .In forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both viewpoints and give Linking Words
Correct article usage
an opinon
opinon
in conclusion .
To Embark,supporters of the first idea argued living Correct your spelling
opinion
straightforward
life will overcome Correct article usage
a straightforward
the
environmental challenges.Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, by analysing the earlier time, we come to know that environmental issues are very less ,as to Linking Words
todays
era of innovation.Change to a genitive case
today's
Secondly
,Linking Words
instead
of using motor cars ,Linking Words
bikes
which Correct word choice
and bikes
are consider
substantialChange the verb form
are considered
of
habitat destruction in Change preposition
apply
shorten
Replace the word
short
distance
to commute,we can use Fix the agreement mistake
distances
bicycle
which are Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
environmental
friendly.Change the adjective
environmentally
Morever
,in spite of utilizing carbon footprint Correct your spelling
Moreover
such
as cars Linking Words
who
usually Correct pronoun usage
which
depends
on carbon consumption ,we can Change the verb form
depend
also
use public transport which Linking Words
are cost
less and valued Wrong verb form
costs
medium
.
On the flip side,proponents of the latter idea believed that advancement in technology Change preposition
as medium
will
overcome the environmental challenges.To explain,the main problem we are facing in Wrong verb form
would
todays
world is Change to a genitive case
today's
massive
usage of carbon,Correct article usage
the massive
methane
Correct word choice
and methane
product's consumption
, Change noun form
products
as a result
, Linking Words
the
global warming,Correct article usage
apply
water
and air pollution are increasing consistently.Scientists have invented Correct word choice
and water
the
electric cars which are less natural Correct article usage
apply
reservoirs
consumers,Change the noun form
reservoir
furthermore
, it does have any detrimental effects on Linking Words
habitat
.Correct article usage
the habitat
Moreover
, scientists Linking Words
also
struggling to find Linking Words
alternative
Fix the agreement mistake
alternatives
of
plastic bags .
In conclusion,both ideas have equal merits and standards.Living a minimalist lifeChange preposition
to
contribute
Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
struggles
to make habitat friendly in Change preposition
to struggles
Correct article usage
the shorten
shorten
term ,Replace the word
short
whereas
Linking Words
for
Change preposition
in
longer
term we should work on Add an article
the longer
advancement
of technology and science.Add an article
the advancement
Submitted by notkhan01 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.