Some university stundents want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
students
have a willingness to learn other
subjects
besides
their main
subject
,
while
others believe that investing their time and money in studying for a
qualification
is more important. On
one
hand, it is common that most
students
have
such
a high curiosity to learn other majors outside their main major because of several things.
First,
some
students
want to widen their
horizon
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and comprehend their understanding of knowledge itself.
This
means that
students
sometimes want to learn about other perspectives that enrich their previous perspective so that they can see
one
phenomenon or
one
problem from many
point
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of
views
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that might
be leading
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them to several possible solutions.
Second,
some
students
want to widen their social circle so that their life is more colourful. It has to be admitted that sometimes having friends from different
subjects
is so beneficial in many aspects not only for entertainment purposes but
also
in a chance to get job vacancies later on.
On the other hand
, some people believe that most
students
should focus more on getting a
qualification
rather than learning another
subject
because of making
good
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resume and preparing to be a professional.
Resume
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is
one
of the important documents that
needed
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when
applying
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jobs. A good resume can be made by doing some training in
one
field to get a certificate as a
signed
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of qualifications.
That is
why some
students
are highly recommended to reach
this
qualification
rather than wasting time and effort to learn new
subjects
.
This
is aligned with the perspective that several qualifications in
one
subject
can make
student
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students
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ease
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to be a professional because they have special skills. In the capitalist system, a specialized worker is highly needed rather than a worker with different skills. All in all, some
students
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wants
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learn
another
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another subject
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subjects
beside
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their main
subject
because they can gain
comprehensive
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understanding and they can
have
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new friends with different
subjects
. Meanwhile, some people believe is better to get a
qualification
for the sake of making
good
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resume for
job
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and preparing for a professional worker.
However
, the second opinion is just
to
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conventional and strict for
students
who should have
different
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way of thinking that can make them more creative and have resiliency to face many problems.
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