You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I am your new tenant Gill and I am living in one of your
house
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houses

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located in Brampton at Venue Road. The area is very nice and clean
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that
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which

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is why I was hoping to rent
this
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house for
long
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the long

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term but I am having
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an issue
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issue
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issues

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with the loud music
played
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playing

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at
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a neighbors
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neighbors
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neighbor's

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house. I am a working
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professional

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and I have young children
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therefore
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, therefore

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, loud noise is a huge trouble for me and my family. The person living next door is not very respectful and he plays loud music early in
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the morning

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which wakes up my family and I am very disappointed about
this
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situation. I tried to make conversation with him but he did not care much about it.
Moreover
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, I made a
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to city authorities but they did not
took
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take

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any legal action and left him with a warning. I
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would

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appreciate
if
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it if

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you could help me with
this
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problem by talking to the neighbour or I would be happy if you could end my lease
agrement
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agreement

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next month so I would be able to move to a new place. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Gill

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