You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I am your new tenant Gill and I am living in one of your

house

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located in Brampton at Venue Road. The area is very nice and clean

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that

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is why I was hoping to rent

this

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house for

long

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term but I am having

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an issue

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issue

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with the loud music

played

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playing

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a neighbors

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neighbors

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house. I am a working

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and I have young children

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therefore

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, loud noise is a huge trouble for me and my family. The person living next door is not very respectful and he plays loud music early in

morning

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which wakes up my family and I am very disappointed about

this

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situation. I tried to make conversation with him but he did not care much about it.

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, I made a

complain

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to city authorities but they did not

took

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any legal action and left him with a warning. I

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appreciate

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you could help me with

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problem by talking to the neighbour or I would be happy if you could end my lease

agrement

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next month so I would be able to move to a new place. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Gill

gill.g24Tue Oct 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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