The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph gives information on five distinct equipment used by the proportion of American families over the four-year period.
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,
it is clear that
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washing machines were the most popular technology in 1995,
while
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the Internet was the least. All of the machines had rising trends throughout the whole period. In 1995, there was 60 per
cent
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of domestic families in the USA used washing machines, and the second most popular stuff was computers, which had two-fifths of users. Over the following three years, these increased steadily, yet the
people
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who had phones, which experienced a significant growth, outweighed those with computers, they were almost 75 per
cent
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and 70 per
cent
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respectively in the year 1999. By 1995, the figure for owning DVD players was just under 25 per
cent
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, and it decreased to around 15 per
cent
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in 1996. After that, DVD rose stably year by year and it had the same proportion of households as the Internet just over 20 per
cent
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and 30 per
cent
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in the years 1997 and 1998.
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