During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know my problem,that I took a flight to Hanoi on Vietnam Airlines on November 27th. It was by chance that we met on

this

flight ,I’m very happy to meet you and know that you are a businessman with restaurants. That makes me admire it very much.I want to let you know that I am

also

looking for a

job

in a

restaurant

.One important thing is that I used to work at a

restaurant

in Hanoi ,

now

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but now

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I intend to move to Hue

city

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City

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.I wonder if there are any restaurants in

this

city that have the

job

I want ,the

job

I want is

restaurant

management. I have over three years of

experience

in the

restaurant

industry.The main reason for

this

is that I have some

experience

to give

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in giving

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services

for

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the guests .

Moreover

, I am

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apply

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flexible and friendly, from

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point of view, I am suitable for

this

kind of

job

.Because I have had work

experience

over the years.

Hopefully

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Hopefully,

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with my qualifications and

experience

above,you will give me

this

management position.If I take on

this

position,I believe I will perform well. I’m looking forward to hearing from you . Best regards Ms. Phuong Chi

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to follow a clear and logical structure in your letter, with a proper introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

coherence cohesion

Use an appropriate greeting and closing in your letter.

coherence cohesion

Organize your ideas by discussing one main idea per paragraph.

task achievement

Address all the points mentioned in the prompt and provide more specific details.

task achievement

Maintain a professional and formal tone throughout the letter.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

209 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

chain of restaurants
potential job opportunity
relevant experience
managerial role
customer service
qualifications
certifications
unique skills
eagerness
admiration
resume
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face-to-face meeting

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