During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to let you know my problem,that I took a flight to Hanoi on Vietnam Airlines on November 27th. It was by chance that we met on
this
flight ,I’m very happy to meet you and know that you are a businessman with restaurants. That makes me admire it very much.I want to let you know that I am
also
looking for a
job
in a
restaurant
.One important thing is that I used to work at a
restaurant
in Hanoi ,
now
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but now
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I intend to move to Hue
city
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.I wonder if there are any restaurants in
this
city that have the
job
I want ,the
job
I want is
restaurant
management. I have over three years of
experience
in the
restaurant
industry.The main reason for
this
is that I have some
experience
to give
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in giving
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services
for
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to
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the guests .
Moreover
, I am
a
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flexible and friendly, from
mu
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my
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point of view, I am suitable for
this
kind of
job
.Because I have had work
experience
over the years.
Hopefully
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Hopefully,
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with my qualifications and
experience
above,you will give me
this
management position.If I take on
this
position,I believe I will perform well. I’m looking forward to hearing from you . Best regards Ms. Phuong Chi
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to follow a clear and logical structure in your letter, with a proper introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use an appropriate greeting and closing in your letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas by discussing one main idea per paragraph.
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Address all the points mentioned in the prompt and provide more specific details.
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Maintain a professional and formal tone throughout the letter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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