The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
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The pie charts make a comparison between the respective percentages of
coffee
consumption and production based on the regions all around the world,
as well as
the profit gained by each party involved. Europe consumes
coffee
more than the other continents,
whereas
the country
that is
the highest contributor to making caffeine is South Africa.
Furthermore
, the majority of income generated by the
coffee
industry was given to the delivery company. Europe leads the
coffee
consumption proportion among all regions in the globe. More than 40% of global consumption was made by Europe, which is slightly higher than America.
In addition
, almost half of the global
coffee
production came from South Africa, contributing as much as around 44%. More than half of the profit distribution of the
coffee
industry is gained by the delivery party. On the other side, caffeine exporters only got around 10% of the margin generated from
coffee
sales.
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