Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Helping poor
countris
by giving them Correct your spelling
countries
money
is not always effective, Thus
, There is
must other ways of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
help
rather than Wrong verb form
helping
money
that could be more effective. In my opinion, money
is not a surefire way to aid raise countries, instead
, we should looking
for other methods Wrong verb form
look
helping
them Change the verb form
to help
on
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in
short
and long term.
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the short
a short
Firstly
, Money
is not the
issue for developed countries, it's about managing the Correct article usage
an
resources
. Consequently
, if there's a
bad management the Remove the article
apply
money
will fade out without any touching impact
. For example
, spending that money
on buildings and stractures
that are not getting any beneficial income could Correct your spelling
structures
helping
the inhabitants. Wrong verb form
help
Moreover
, invalid
government could waste any Correct article usage
an invalid
resources
without doubt as a result
of, absence
of monitoring. so they Correct article usage
the absence
are
might Unnecessary verb
apply
taking
that Change the verb form
take
be taking
money
for individual-purposes
Correct your spelling
individual purposes
not
for Add the comma(s)
, not
puplic-inetrest
. Correct your spelling
public-interest
Therefore
, observing is a must to ensure that aid will be helpful for civillans
.
Correct your spelling
civilians
Secondly
, direct
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directing
this
financial aid to other ways such
as full
paid scholarships and vocational training, certainly Change the adjective
fully
will conduct
a tremendous Verb problem
has
impact
on citizens and also
countries. investing in human Rephrase
apply
resources
by learning them something they could get money
from will impact
on various things for
instance, economic and unemployment rates. Add the comma(s)
, for
Therefore
, by implement
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implementing
such
solutions, it will be a sureway
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sure way
for
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to
lend
a hand to Change the verb form
lending
residants
in these areas.
In conclusion. giving Correct your spelling
residents
money
to the raising
nations is not always the optimal way for several reasons. Alternatively, we should go through different methods to make sure coping with Correct your spelling
rising
this
Correct determiner usage
these
resources
will release
a Verb problem
have
postive
Correct your spelling
positive
impact
on inhabitants
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inhabitants'
inhabitant's
lifes
.Correct your spelling
lives
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