Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Helping poor

countris

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countries

by giving them

money

is not always effective,

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, There

is

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must other ways of

help

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helping

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rather than

money

that could be more effective. In my opinion,

money

is not a surefire way to aid raise countries,

instead

, we should

looking

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look

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for other methods

helping

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to help

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them

on

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in

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short

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the short

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and long term.

Firstly

,

Money

is not

the

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issue for developed countries, it's about managing the

resources

.

Consequently

, if there's

a

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bad management the

money

will fade out without any touching

impact

.

For example

, spending that

money

on buildings and

stractures

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structures

that are not getting any beneficial income could

helping

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the inhabitants.

Moreover

,

invalid

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an invalid

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government could waste any

resources

without doubt

as a result

of,

absence

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the absence

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of monitoring. so they

are

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might

taking

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take

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that

money

for

individual-purposes

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individual purposes

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not

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for

puplic-inetrest

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public-interest

.

Therefore

, observing is a must to ensure that aid will be helpful for

civillans

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civilians

.

Secondly

,

direct

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this

financial aid to other ways

such

as

full

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fully

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paid scholarships and vocational training, certainly

will conduct

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a tremendous

impact

on citizens and

also

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countries. investing in human

resources

by learning them something they could get

money

from will

impact

on various things

for

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instance, economic and unemployment rates.

Therefore

,

by implement

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implementing

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such

solutions, it will be a

sureway

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sure way

for

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to

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lend

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a hand to

residants

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residents

in these areas. In conclusion. giving

money

to the

raising

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rising

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nations is not always the optimal way for several reasons. Alternatively, we should go through different methods to make sure coping with

this

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these

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resources

will

release

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have

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a

postive

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positive

impact

on

inhabitants

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inhabitants'

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lifes

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lives

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.