The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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United
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the United
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Kingdom
tax
revenue
and total
goverment
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government
spending for
last
year. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clear to notice that income
tax
was the biggest source of
revenue
for
UK
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the UK
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, and pensions were the largest expenditure area. The
sources
that the UK
goverment
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government
most needed
last
year were income
tax
, which made up 28% of
tax
revenue
, national insurance taxes which contained twenty one% and
value added
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tax
which was 17%.
Also
among the three lowest
sources
were fuel duty, business rates and council
tax
, each of them making up 5
percent
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per cent
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of total
revenue
. The rest
sources
of
money
for the UK were corporation
tax
and other
sources
. The top four of
spendings
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spending
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containe
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contained
contain
pensions with 20
percent
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per cent
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, health care which
were
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was
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up to 18
percent
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per cent
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, education(14%) and welfare with seventeen
percent
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per cent
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. The least amount of
money
were
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was
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spent on transport and general government, both
area
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areas
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receiving 3
percent
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per cent
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of the
money
each. The rest of the
money
went on interest payments on debt, defence and protection like law, police and fire
department
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departments
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.
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