The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
chart demonstrates how people in different countries
spend
their money on several kinds of Wrong verb form
spent
stuffs
in 2002.
Food, drinks, and tobacco occupied the dominant position among all the consumptions, which Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
surpass
the total percentage of clothing/footwear and leisure/education. Wrong verb form
surpassed
In
the five Change preposition
Of
countries
, Ireland and Turkey purchase more these
types of goods than others, which are 28.91% and 32.14% respectively. Change preposition
of these
Besides
, Italy, Spain, and Sweden put in similar
amount of money on these Add an article
a similar
good
, all of the percentages are between 15% and 19%.
The expenditure Fix the agreement mistake
goods
of
clothing and footwear of different Change preposition
on
countries
are close to each other, which are
merely under 10%. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Comparing
with the other four nations, the cost of clothes and shoes in Italy ranked Wrong verb form
Compared
the
first Correct article usage
apply
for
9.00%, Change preposition
at
while
Sweden only consumed 5.40%. It is worth to mention
that Ireland, Spain, and Turkey Change the verb form
mentioning
spended
nearly the same percentage on these product categories, which are only less than 0.20% of Correct your spelling
spent
Correct article usage
the differences
differences
between each other.
In terms of leisure and education, they got the smallest ratio in the national consumer expenditure Fix the agreement mistake
difference
that
all the five Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
are
under 5%. Unnecessary verb
apply
By contrast
, resident
in Turkey preferred to spend more on Fix the agreement mistake
residents
recreations
and Fix the agreement mistake
recreation
knowleged-learning
than others.
Correct your spelling
knowledge-learning
To sum up
, consumers in the five nations spend the most on food, drinks, and tobacco. And it is noteworthy that people in Spain valued clothing/footwear the lowest among all the countries
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