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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #skills #qualifications
There is no denying the fact that social
skills
 are crucial to success in life.
While
 it is a commonly held belief that social
skills
 are crucial as much as academic
qualifications
, there is
also
 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider social
skills
 to be one of the most important aspects to have in any job interview.
To begin
 with,
Skills
 are equally important as much as academic
qualifications
.
In other words
, if there was a balance between them it help in his career.
In addition
, there are some
skills
really
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in academic
qualifications
 like problem-solving.
For Example
, it needs knowledge from academic study and
also
 needs the skill to think quickly about how to solve it. Another point to consider, social
skills
 will contribute to personal and professional success.
It
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also
 possible to say that it will
make
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take
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 portray to higher positions because you have the skill for it.
Moreover
, depending solely on academic
qualifications
 will hold you back.
For instance
, it will take a lot of effort to finish one task if you do not have the correct
skills
 In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that the best way is to have both and balance them because nowadays if you have one without the other it is considered a limitation so yes it is crucial to have both.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social skills
  • academic qualifications
  • interpersonal communication
  • teamwork
  • emotional intelligence
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • leadership
  • career advancement
  • job interviews
  • networking
  • soft skills
  • self-awareness
  • adaptability
  • collaboration
  • creativity
  • analytical skills
  • educational system
  • real-world situations
  • economic success
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