The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of expenses (on three things) to the
overall
spending, which
categorized
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by the
age
groups
of UK citizens in 2004.
Overall
, food and beverages
is
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the highest contributor to the total expenditure in some
age
groups
.
Furthermore
, there are only slight percentage differences among these categories in the 31-45 and 46-60
age
groups
. Most of the
overall
expense of residents belonging to the
age
groups
of 31-45, 46-60, and 76+ is spent on food and drink.
For instance
,
this
accounted for more than 20%
between
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of
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the 76+ years old citizens. On the other side, some
age
groups
show that the least contributor
of
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their expenditure is restaurant and hotel. The expenditures on food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment account for similar proportions to the total spending between the
age
groups
of 31-45 and 46-60.
For instance
, more than 10% of the expense
allocated
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is allocated
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for each of these categories among the 46-60
years
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year
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old residents.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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