The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of expenses (on three things) to the
overall
spending, which categorized
by the Add a missing verb
was categorized
age
groups
of UK citizens in 2004. Overall
, food and beverages is
the highest contributor to the total expenditure in some Change the verb form
are
age
groups
. Furthermore
, there are only slight percentage differences among these categories in the 31-45 and 46-60 age
groups
.
Most of the overall
expense of residents belonging to the age
groups
of 31-45, 46-60, and 76+ is spent on food and drink. For instance
, this
accounted for more than 20% between
the 76+ years old citizens. On the other side, some Change preposition
of
age
groups
show that the least contributor of
their expenditure is restaurant and hotel.
The expenditures on food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment account for similar proportions to the total spending between the Change preposition
to
age
groups
of 31-45 and 46-60. For instance
, more than 10% of the expense allocated
for each of these categories among the 46-60 Add a missing verb
is allocated
years
old residents.Fix the agreement mistake
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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