The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The
given
bar chart illustrates the proportion of humankind (males, females, and children) on Verb problem
apply
eating
five times produces in a day in the UK over an eight-year period between 2001 and 2008. Wrong verb form
ate
Overall
, Women are by far the highest consumer
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consumers
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of
on
goods. Meanwhile, children consumed the smallest portion throughout the given period.
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of
To begin
with, females surpassed the figure for the other categories. It stood at just above 20% at first then
rose significantly by 10% in 2006. On
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From
this
point onwards, the proportion on
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of
vegetables
and fruit consumption witnessed a decline Fix the agreement mistake
vegetable
at
approximately 30% in the following two years.
Regarding the two remaining groupings, Men and Kids saw stable trends in the three early periods. Males started at around 17% before experiencing a gradual increase from 17% to 28% between 2004 and 2007 and remaining steady in 2008 at roughly 28%, Change preposition
of
then
decreased to nearly 25% at finished
. Verb problem
the end
In contrast
, Child started slightly lower than fellows at about 12% in the beginning then
rose gradually and reached a peak at precisely 25% in 2007 before dropping a slight point almost
24% Change preposition
to almost
at the end
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