The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the changes that occurred in Newport City in three different types of crime from the year 2003 to 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the burglary trend presented the most significant reduction over the years,
while
car theft showed an increase despite some fluctuations.
However
, robbery
remain
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consistent and stayed as the crime with the least number of incidents.
Firstly
, burglary started as the crime with the most incidents in 2003 with a little bit less than 3500, in 2004 presented the highest peak with around 3700 and dropped in 2008 with almost 1100,
then
remained steady until the end of the period.
On the other hand
, car theft presented a number of 2800 in 2003 but in 2006 it fell to over 2000,
after
this
it started to grow slowly finishing with a rate of over 2700. Even though the figures for robbery remained quite similar over the years, it showed a decrease in 2008 to a rate of 500 but despite some fluctuations came back to a similar rate when it started in 2003 with over 600 in 2012.
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