The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart illustrates the changes that occurred in Newport City in three different types of crime from the year 2003 to 2012.

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it is clear that

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the burglary trend presented the most significant reduction over the years,

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car theft showed an increase despite some fluctuations.

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, robbery

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consistent and stayed as the crime with the least number of incidents.

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, burglary started as the crime with the most incidents in 2003 with a little bit less than 3500, in 2004 presented the highest peak with around 3700 and dropped in 2008 with almost 1100,

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remained steady until the end of the period.

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, car theft presented a number of 2800 in 2003 but in 2006 it fell to over 2000,

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it started to grow slowly finishing with a rate of over 2700. Even though the figures for robbery remained quite similar over the years, it showed a decrease in 2008 to a rate of 500 but despite some fluctuations came back to a similar rate when it started in 2003 with over 600 in 2012.

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The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?

Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?

Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

Many elderly people are no longer after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?